re: the top two- I prefer the lower one with the negative space in it. Something about the font, especially the HPRN letters, isn't right but I can't quite put my finger on it. Too bold? I like the font with the words spelled out.
re: the lower two- I like this direction. I like the font. I like the larger wheat head in the top version. Any way to add another wheat head to get away from the' garlandish feel, or does that get too literal?
Again, very nice revisions. Here are quick takes:
ReplyDeletere: the top two- I prefer the lower one with the negative space in it. Something about the font, especially the HPRN letters, isn't right but I can't quite put my finger on it. Too bold? I like the font with the words spelled out.
re: the lower two- I like this direction. I like the font. I like the larger wheat head in the top version. Any way to add another wheat head to get away from the' garlandish feel, or does that get too literal?
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